Re-touched life

Lifeless....faded... scribbles..
Locked and forgotten
Collection of only dust..by past users
Colours dampened by lost touch of any light
A once piece of artwork.. faceless.. lays flat over cold wooden boards
In the attic... abandoned
Feels of no recollection of the past
Stoned-faced.. only still time

An artist with an outlook of a new future
Re-visions of purpose ... and smiles
Like a fever, the artist infects her and quickly spreads

Stroked with fine lines of new paint
Abling vibrancy and breath
Capturing a stream of new explorations
Added in textures of a new body
Defining the path of lost senses... sight, touch, smell
The artist fills in the space, which was once void

No longer just a painting, but pulled into the reality
Together with the artist
Now recognized and given re-touched birth

That is just beautiful Teanie! I'd love to read more of your work

i'll make future poems = i ask for a poetry section.. since it is a form of art, but this is actual thoughts and feelings of my own. Not a response to another person's poem

that is so effin cute!!! TEAA!

lol thanks razo! but i didn't mean for it to be cutesy >.< it was an actual time i felt ugly, and a guy came to me and made me feel pretty again. (awsome party that day)

Teacrazer wrote:lol thanks razo! but i didn't mean for it to be cutesy >.< it was an actual time i felt ugly, and a guy came to me and made me feel pretty again. (awsome party that day)

when did you make it?
btw... for me everything, is cute.

lol well i guess its cute.. i made it when i was in my sophmore year of highschool the objective of the poem was to incorporate a visual aspect.

But, i made a tweak of changes like rephrased it since it was the 15 year old version of me. My teacher said it sounded overly sexual and my previous poem was much simpilar and basic.